Kiteboarding went Live on BayNEWS9

[Whitey]

Originally Posted by Alex

"the artists had previously determined how the paint should flow
the elder found vice on the tip of his toe
and made it his selfish goal to set out and escalate his status quo
now the piece was split in two... a mutiny if you will

the tale does not end there
for only one option could be fair
the elder refused to care
as he sat upon his "almighty" chair,
while the victims sat in deep despair

again the story doesn't end for these two men
from here on out shall never blend
never again will the hand extend
for the elder lost a friend."

-Fredrick Abington

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=skCV2L0c6K0

[Danimal8199]

That ish is funny! hahah

I expected the link for the kiteboarding video and that made it even funnier!

Seahorses Rock!

[Unimog Bob]

Of course it was an ad, WSW is a business.

In terms of commercials (from a technical writer's pov) , that one was very well done. The info was presented concisely and correctly. Clips/images tied in perfectly with the narration which was accurate. Not sure about those Dakine shorts rockin' (if you like wedgies like Tom, I guess).
Otherwise, I can't see how you would improve upon it. Also, Steve-O was clear and didn't look like a beach stoner (nice job).

Alex, I hope that's not required reading for college students these days. It ends in rhyme but has zero reason or flow.
Not sure that would even have gotten a "B" from Dr. Littlefield.

[Alex]

not my poem, fit the situation though...more about the content then the flow bob, at least i look like a beach stoner though.

doc hated me.

[Unimog Bob]

Not as much as Mrs. Russell (AP E. teacher at time) hated me.
I know it's not your poem, it sucks too bad to be.

Now this video has awesome narration. (as well as awesome color coordination)

[hrpufnstuf]

Originally Posted by Alex

not my poem, fit the situation though...more about the content then the flow bob, at least i look like a beach stoner though.

doc hated me.

Ok So what are you TRYING to say?

[Danimal8199]

Just saw the video. You guys did a good job on it and I wouldn't expect anything less from Steve-O!

[Whitey]

yes please help me out also, how did that poem fit the situation?

[Alex]

it wasnt meant for you

[Whitey]

Cool, cause I'm the only elder in the clip and I have been checking all my toes for vice on the tips and I can't see anything. I did notice a bald spot in the video that kind of sucks. Had a great day on the 12m flysurfer today, Chad and I went from Sunset out to 3 rooker dead up wind and then rode the glass slick on the inside of it by our selves for sometime, and hauled ass back to Sunset 1 hour 10 min out 18 min back.