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"the artists had previously determined how the paint should flow
the elder found vice on the tip of his toe and made it his selfish goal to set out and escalate his status quo now the piece was split in two... a mutiny if you will the tale does not end there for only one option could be fair the elder refused to care as he sat upon his "almighty" chair, while the victims sat in deep despair again the story doesn't end for these two men from here on out shall never blend never again will the hand extend for the elder lost a friend." -Fredrick Abington |
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That ish is funny! hahah
I expected the link for the kiteboarding video and that made it even funnier! Seahorses Rock! |
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Of course it was an ad, WSW is a business.
In terms of commercials (from a technical writer's pov) , that one was very well done. The info was presented concisely and correctly. Clips/images tied in perfectly with the narration which was accurate. Not sure about those Dakine shorts rockin' (if you like wedgies like Tom, I guess). Otherwise, I can't see how you would improve upon it. Also, Steve-O was clear and didn't look like a beach stoner (nice job). Alex, I hope that's not required reading for college students these days. It ends in rhyme but has zero reason or flow. Not sure that would even have gotten a "B" from Dr. Littlefield. Last edited by Unimog Bob; 06-16-2009 at 03:34 PM. |
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not my poem, fit the situation though...more about the content then the flow bob, at least i look like a beach stoner though.
doc hated me. Last edited by Alex; 06-16-2009 at 10:55 PM. |
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Not as much as Mrs. Russell (AP E. teacher at time) hated me.
I know it's not your poem, it sucks too bad to be. Now this video has awesome narration. (as well as awesome color coordination) |
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Ok So what are you TRYING to say?
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Just saw the video. You guys did a good job on it and I wouldn't expect anything less from Steve-O!
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