That ish is funny! hahah

I expected the link for the kiteboarding video and that made it even funnier!

Seahorses Rock!

Of course it was an ad, WSW is a business.

In terms of commercials (from a technical writer's pov) , that one was very well done. The info was presented concisely and correctly. Clips/images tied in perfectly with the narration which was accurate. Not sure about those Dakine shorts rockin' (if you like wedgies like Tom, I guess). :confused:
Otherwise, I can't see how you would improve upon it. Also, Steve-O was clear and didn't look like a beach stoner (nice job).

Alex, I hope that's not required reading for college students these days. It ends in rhyme but has zero reason or flow.
Not sure that would even have gotten a "B" from Dr. Littlefield.

not my poem, fit the situation though...more about the content then the flow bob, at least i look like a beach stoner though.

doc hated me.

Not as much as Mrs. Russell (AP E. teacher at time) hated me.
I know it's not your poem, it sucks too bad to be. :)

Now this video has awesome narration. (as well as awesome color coordination) :o

Ok So what are you TRYING to say?

Just saw the video. You guys did a good job on it and I wouldn't expect anything less from Steve-O!

yes please help me out also, how did that poem fit the situation?

it wasnt meant for you

Cool, cause I'm the only elder in the clip and I have been checking all my toes for vice on the tips and I can't see anything. I did notice a bald spot in the video that kind of sucks. Had a great day on the 12m flysurfer today, Chad and I went from Sunset out to 3 rooker dead up wind and then rode the glass slick on the inside of it by our selves for sometime, and hauled ass back to Sunset 1 hour 10 min out 18 min back.